Shades of the Cataclysm (cancelled comic)
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Credit: MysteriousShine


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bzzt! I acquired the cargo. -
It really is the real deal - I’ve never seen something like it before. -
They have dozens of them, but they only let me take one, so you’ll have to send someone else to strike a deal. bzzt!
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It was just two days ago that I was back in my room… (stares out the window at a strange man) -
I knew they wanted to get rid of me… “Sunch an unruly, creepy child.” (looks at the orphanage caretakers) -
I just never expected them to just give me away with not even any paperwork involved… (the caretakers are talking to the man, Satra is spying on them).
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*Flashes back to the present, the man is holding her chin*
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Incredible, its eyes even sparkle like diamonds…
*He unties her hair and runs his fingers through it*
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And its hair… it’s so beautiful…
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NAME! You aren’t paid to play with the cargo. -
NAME2! Been a lot since I’ve seen you, brother. -
Good to see you too. I’ll be taking over the cargo for the next section, as per our contract. Get lost. Don’t follow.
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Stop fooling around, I didn’t hire you for that. Go find us something to drink, I’m thirsty.
*The man walks away, leaving the other man to watch over Satra*
*Switches to view of the carriage rolling through the wasteland*
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I thought about running away. They didn’t lock up the door, they let me out… But I knew I’d never make it far. -
I’d never been outside the Crystal Republik. I wouldn’t have survived a day alone in the wasteland. -
They kept me well fed. -
Every once in a while, the carriage driver would change. Guess that made it harder to track down, neither of them knew the destination.
This story is basically just a comic adaptation of Satra's "Stories of the Stars" tale. You can read that if you want the full story. I was going to make this comic as part of my assignment but it turned out to not fit the task very well so I changed the project and I won't be working on it anymore. Here's the one page I drew, a sketch of the second page, and some of the script.
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