Shades of the Cataclysm (cancelled comic)

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Shades of the Cataclysm page 1

Shades of the Cataclysm page 2 (scrapped)

Page 2 text:

  • bzzt! I acquired the cargo. 
  • It really is the real deal - I’ve never seen something like it before.
  • They have dozens of them, but they only let me take one, so you’ll have to send someone else to strike a deal. bzzt!
 
  • It was just two days ago that I was back in my room… (stares out the window at a strange man)
  • I knew they wanted to get rid of me… “Sunch an unruly, creepy child.” (looks at the orphanage caretakers)
  • I just never expected them to just give me away with not even any paperwork involved… (the caretakers are talking to the man, Satra is spying on them).


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*Flashes back to the present, the man is holding her chin*


  • Incredible, its eyes even sparkle like diamonds…



*He unties her hair and runs his fingers through it*


  • And its hair… it’s so beautiful…
 
  • NAME! You aren’t paid to play with the cargo.
  • NAME2! Been a lot since I’ve seen you, brother.
  • Good to see you too. I’ll be taking over the cargo for the next section, as per our contract. Get lost. Don’t follow.
 
  • Stop fooling around, I didn’t hire you for that. Go find us something to drink, I’m thirsty.
*The man walks away, leaving the other man to watch over Satra*

*Switches to view of the carriage rolling through the wasteland*
  • I thought about running away. They didn’t lock up the door, they let me out… But I knew I’d never make it far.
  • I’d never been outside the Crystal Republik. I wouldn’t have survived a day alone in the wasteland.
  • They kept me well fed.
  • Every once in a while, the carriage driver would change. Guess that made it harder to track down, neither of them knew the destination.
Shades of the Cataclysm (cancelled comic)
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This story is basically just a comic adaptation of Satra's "Stories of the Stars" tale. You can read that if you want the full story. I was going to make this comic as part of my assignment but it turned out to not fit the task very well so I changed the project and I won't be working on it anymore. Here's the one page I drew, a sketch of the second page, and some of the script.

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